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When I was 5 I carried the ball out for the millwall vs Manchester United game in the fa cup final and accidently fell over sprained my knee and dis formed the ball so the officials delayed the game why I was put in an ambulance and replace the ball

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    Mr Worsley

    I hope you were supporting Millwall George? If so I could believe your story. Bear in mind, journalistic articles avoid using the first person when presenting unbiased and believable facts, but I like your beginning. Read it aloud to check you’re using the right tense, i.e. “replace”

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